I loved the description of the layers. Layers of anger and discomfort. Layers of hope and confidence. It’s so genuine and relatable. One of the things you do very well in your writing is zoom in then zoom out then back in and all together it helps the reader know the context and how you feel in it, which is a great example of the flow of consciousness in day to day life.
Abba and I enjoyed your words about Rashi's leadership. In Abba's words: the world needs you. Needs you to write.
😭😭 I’ll try to keep going
I loved the description of the layers. Layers of anger and discomfort. Layers of hope and confidence. It’s so genuine and relatable. One of the things you do very well in your writing is zoom in then zoom out then back in and all together it helps the reader know the context and how you feel in it, which is a great example of the flow of consciousness in day to day life.
Thank you! That is very insightful. Your feedback is invaluable
Feel good and take care!
I’m so glad, it’s a joy to read your work.
Thank you! Shabbat shalom.